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Ash's unova Journey my version chapter 25
Chapter 25:  Litwik and the haunted mansion
   We join our heros as they are still traveling thourhg the forest area as they are heading to Nimbassa city and the site of Ash's next but troulbing weather is brewing for our hero's.
Misty: those clouds in the sky doesn't seem to be a good sign
Ash: well since we had a dry spell for the last few days here in the forest i can understand why
Snivy: Heat or not snivy's aren't that great in rain even if we are grass types
Pikachu: And that goes for pikachu too
Ash: Hey brock is there anything close by that we can go to so these two won't complain about the rain.
Brock: *while holding the map* According to the map there should be an abandon mansion nearby where we can stop and wait out the storm if it comes
As they can see the dark clouds starting to cover the sky more and more as they can tell by the winds and the smell in the air that it was coming. As it started to rain.
Ash: Man rotten luck
Brock: We are not far lets go
As th
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A promise kept Ash's johto journey chapter 4
   Chapter 4 (for real): A sappy tree tale
We join our hero's as they make their way to cherrygrove city and then violet city the site of ash's first gym battle as they walked their way through a foresty area that is near a small river stream. As it looks like most of the forest is like it was demolished either that or winter has hit the area.
Misty: Are we near cherrygrove city anytime soon Brock
Brock: According to the map we should be there by the end of the day as long as we go this path
Misty: you said that an hour ago
Ash: What's the matter misty your freaking out more than usual
Misty: We're in the forest area what do you think Ash
Brock: Well your not gonna like a gym that's coming up according to the guidbook
Misty: Please don't be the next one
Brock: Its after the next gym actually but its a bit of away from here
Misty: *sighs* As long as they don't go near me i'm fine
Brock: Speaking of which doesn't this forest look kinda of empty to you guys
As they look around a
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A promise Kept Ash's johto Journey chapter 3
Chapter 3: A new rival enters a pokemon team fan
   We join our hero's as they make route to Ash's next goal Violet city and the cite of Ash's next gym battle along with a new pokemon that joined Ash's team as they started to enjoy a nice lunch as the newest member was getting to know the team.
Pikachu: So totodile what made you deside to join Ash and not go with the trainer that was gonna have you.
Totodile: *Looks down and sighs* I've seen many pokemon that came from the lab who were specifically choosen to be with a trainer and many hated it including me.
Bulbasaur: I can understand after all i've knew a few
Totodile: Its not good cause many don't go through what most starters should allow the new trainer to choose while i didn't mind that i'm somewhat glad i didn't get choosen by the one who chikorita was.
Squirtle: So Chikorita is a grass type starter like bulbasaur right
Totodile: Yes and I'm aware your the kanto starters as i've only seen you in Elm's studies.
Pidgeot:
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An evil disguise - evil Zorua tf
One day, a man called John was walking along in a nearby forest when suddenly, he saw a red Zorua tail piece of a costume.  "Hmm, odd, what's that doing there?" he asked as he picked it up.  As he examined it, it looked perfectly normal apart from the fact that it was red.  "Hmm, I wonder why it is red?" he said.  "Won't hurt putting it on" he said as he lowered his trousers and attached it to his lower back.  Once that happened, it fused to his skin.  "WHAT?!?!" he said startled as he pulled it, only to receive a jolt of pain as it became his own.
Most of the rest of his body then got covered in fur apart from his hands, feet, eyebrows and eyelids, which grew black fur.  "What's going on?!?!" He asked himself, scared.  He then proceeded to feel the fur, still frightened to find that it was very soft, which calmed him a little.  His eyes then started hurting, causing him to instinctively close them as they grew and changed position as his pu
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UGH I REALLY HOPE THAT I DON'T HAVE TO BUY A NEW 3DS I'M TIGHT ON MONEY
So many who has been either watching reviews or read them of this game may have noticed the mixed reviews on it some say its worth the buy some say it was a massive step back of the series and should've waited another few months as of now I'm in the middle. Don't get me wrong I've been enjoying the game i'm already gotten through the fourth planet and all but this game for me at the moment kinda sits at a 7 or 7.5 out of 10 and that's a good game on my scale but man does this game has its fault and one of them is noticed at the get go.

I'll save the big one for me for last but one issue i must say while people say the narrative is the weakest I think it was okay i mean the previous mass effect games you shape the narrative with your actions with the paragon and renegade options for this game that option is gone yeah there is choices (i'll get to that later) but that has to do with either what is needed to be on the planet you explore or a choice that can mess up the story or make you regret later especially since from what i heard one character dies by a certain choice later in the game near the game and that's a side mission. Speaking of story this game easily has some contridictions in it especially if you played the previous games like the krogan genophage and the quarian and geth thing i guess this is supposed to be before this but this felt like everything you did meant nothing I did hear that they had their B team writing the story but that doesn't excuse some flaws . Another issue I have is the character animations at the beginning now I know a patch was made to fix that now but boy did they mess this up on the prologe chapter i could swear that the female human/assari character's face was gonna go out of the helmet or is on LSD but boy did they screw that up at launch. Speaking of characters where is the Quarians squadmates they are mentioned in the game but boy I couldn't believe they aren't on the team. Speaking of the team I love everyone aside one and I really wanted to like this character that would be your character Scott ryder seriously not even giving us to name him for him really Bioware. Previous ME games made you do that and don't get me started with his character yeah i can understand he is new as a pathfinder and has a massive descision but BOY is he bland i mean heck he looks like he is just there for decisions not for the narrative you can make the arguement that shepered did the same but he was done right heck his dad and the other pathfinders looked more compitent than him and his dad died and the beginning. And then you got SAM and A.I that is in your head throughout the game he is ANNOYING How bad is he you ask think Navi from OOoT Fi from Skyward Sword yeah that bad and will point out things you already did yeah he gets better with the memory thing you obtain and won't be bad in the first playthroughs but man you will be asking for the mute button on multiple playthroughs. Then comes my biggest complaints you may have heard if you have the PS4 version that there is a game breaking glitch that affects your save file I encountered it once and i got lucky to load a manual save file, now if you were early in the game say were i'm at that can be fine but when your very far in the game you'll be pulling your hair out and i've heard from others this is after day two. Lastly for me is how little this game tells you how certain puzzles work yeah there is no hand holding but boy the monolith puzzles is the worse its supposed to be soduku like puzzle that is fine i've played that *deep breath in and out* the game doesn't tell you how to do that and trust me guys you will be needing a strategy guide or looking online cause these puzzles only give you three tries and it took me three days till i found out what you needed to do press the L2 R2 triggers or the right and left triggers on the Xbox controller HOW ARE WE SUPPOSED TO KNOW THAT? and there is three monoliths on the games planets too you'll need to look it up a lot.

Now i know what you are thinking this sounds like a 4 or 5 out 10 after that I can see that but this game does have its moments aside your characters I do like the rest of the crew the female turrian in priticular is my favorite of the races that is back in the game and soon to be my love interest, we have 3 assaria members and one is half one and the other is a doctor pheebee who is the one that is on your team is quirky but i like her, the Salarian is now the pilot of the ship and his banter with one of the human crew members is funny heck you have two pilots and one is human, then you got the Krogan i will say this he reminds me of Wrex and i loved that guy and still do, then you got the new race the Arragan and boy he is the most interesting character in the game he doesn't trusts you at first in fact that has to do with the second part of the game and that plot twist about near the end of that chapter will make him question a lot of things i really don't want spoil it but i didn't see it coming. The human ones are even cooler too from a guy who loves to fix machines to a guy who would even bring a sofa on a ship i like them and welcome them. While the story isn't the strongest i did like the fact you are trying to find a new place to live and the exploration is manditory to 100% the game especially from what i've heard to get the best ending of the game and i will say this in previous ME games i rarely went back to places especially the first game which is sad cause this game has many secondary missions heck some of the vault and monolith (if not all of) area's is not manditory to beat the story part but if you want to have a vitiliaty of a 100% you want to explore and saved the planet while i hated the climate hazzords this can be changed. The loyalty missions is more than one mission based and i welcome that cause i felt once you do that its over and i wanted more this is actually maditory if you want to do things right. The choices i mentioned actually made me felt that i messed up or it could've been done differently making me think that what would happen on multiple playthroughs if i did it differently.

Trust me guys as much as i want to say more I really haven't beaten the game yet and while i heard the story is kinda on the short side the secondary missions lenghten it but my rating is as is till i beat it so far but i will say this the price point for it now is kinda not a recogmendation especially the collectors editions i'd say wait till its cheaper like 15-20 dollar price drop or wait till more patches come and before anyone asks No i haven't played the multiplayer i heard its the saving grace but the microtransactions is in there and I don't have a PSN account
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Mighty morphin power Rangers vs voltron next death battle screw attack are you really trying to ruin my childhood
So many who has been either watching reviews or read them of this game may have noticed the mixed reviews on it some say its worth the buy some say it was a massive step back of the series and should've waited another few months as of now I'm in the middle. Don't get me wrong I've been enjoying the game i'm already gotten through the fourth planet and all but this game for me at the moment kinda sits at a 7 or 7.5 out of 10 and that's a good game on my scale but man does this game has its fault and one of them is noticed at the get go.

I'll save the big one for me for last but one issue i must say while people say the narrative is the weakest I think it was okay i mean the previous mass effect games you shape the narrative with your actions with the paragon and renegade options for this game that option is gone yeah there is choices (i'll get to that later) but that has to do with either what is needed to be on the planet you explore or a choice that can mess up the story or make you regret later especially since from what i heard one character dies by a certain choice later in the game near the game and that's a side mission. Speaking of story this game easily has some contridictions in it especially if you played the previous games like the krogan genophage and the quarian and geth thing i guess this is supposed to be before this but this felt like everything you did meant nothing I did hear that they had their B team writing the story but that doesn't excuse some flaws . Another issue I have is the character animations at the beginning now I know a patch was made to fix that now but boy did they mess this up on the prologe chapter i could swear that the female human/assari character's face was gonna go out of the helmet or is on LSD but boy did they screw that up at launch. Speaking of characters where is the Quarians squadmates they are mentioned in the game but boy I couldn't believe they aren't on the team. Speaking of the team I love everyone aside one and I really wanted to like this character that would be your character Scott ryder seriously not even giving us to name him for him really Bioware. Previous ME games made you do that and don't get me started with his character yeah i can understand he is new as a pathfinder and has a massive descision but BOY is he bland i mean heck he looks like he is just there for decisions not for the narrative you can make the arguement that shepered did the same but he was done right heck his dad and the other pathfinders looked more compitent than him and his dad died and the beginning. And then you got SAM and A.I that is in your head throughout the game he is ANNOYING How bad is he you ask think Navi from OOoT Fi from Skyward Sword yeah that bad and will point out things you already did yeah he gets better with the memory thing you obtain and won't be bad in the first playthroughs but man you will be asking for the mute button on multiple playthroughs. Then comes my biggest complaints you may have heard if you have the PS4 version that there is a game breaking glitch that affects your save file I encountered it once and i got lucky to load a manual save file, now if you were early in the game say were i'm at that can be fine but when your very far in the game you'll be pulling your hair out and i've heard from others this is after day two. Lastly for me is how little this game tells you how certain puzzles work yeah there is no hand holding but boy the monolith puzzles is the worse its supposed to be soduku like puzzle that is fine i've played that *deep breath in and out* the game doesn't tell you how to do that and trust me guys you will be needing a strategy guide or looking online cause these puzzles only give you three tries and it took me three days till i found out what you needed to do press the L2 R2 triggers or the right and left triggers on the Xbox controller HOW ARE WE SUPPOSED TO KNOW THAT? and there is three monoliths on the games planets too you'll need to look it up a lot.

Now i know what you are thinking this sounds like a 4 or 5 out 10 after that I can see that but this game does have its moments aside your characters I do like the rest of the crew the female turrian in priticular is my favorite of the races that is back in the game and soon to be my love interest, we have 3 assaria members and one is half one and the other is a doctor pheebee who is the one that is on your team is quirky but i like her, the Salarian is now the pilot of the ship and his banter with one of the human crew members is funny heck you have two pilots and one is human, then you got the Krogan i will say this he reminds me of Wrex and i loved that guy and still do, then you got the new race the Arragan and boy he is the most interesting character in the game he doesn't trusts you at first in fact that has to do with the second part of the game and that plot twist about near the end of that chapter will make him question a lot of things i really don't want spoil it but i didn't see it coming. The human ones are even cooler too from a guy who loves to fix machines to a guy who would even bring a sofa on a ship i like them and welcome them. While the story isn't the strongest i did like the fact you are trying to find a new place to live and the exploration is manditory to 100% the game especially from what i've heard to get the best ending of the game and i will say this in previous ME games i rarely went back to places especially the first game which is sad cause this game has many secondary missions heck some of the vault and monolith (if not all of) area's is not manditory to beat the story part but if you want to have a vitiliaty of a 100% you want to explore and saved the planet while i hated the climate hazzords this can be changed. The loyalty missions is more than one mission based and i welcome that cause i felt once you do that its over and i wanted more this is actually maditory if you want to do things right. The choices i mentioned actually made me felt that i messed up or it could've been done differently making me think that what would happen on multiple playthroughs if i did it differently.

Trust me guys as much as i want to say more I really haven't beaten the game yet and while i heard the story is kinda on the short side the secondary missions lenghten it but my rating is as is till i beat it so far but i will say this the price point for it now is kinda not a recogmendation especially the collectors editions i'd say wait till its cheaper like 15-20 dollar price drop or wait till more patches come and before anyone asks No i haven't played the multiplayer i heard its the saving grace but the microtransactions is in there and I don't have a PSN account
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Hello there, Stranger! :wave: revamp 

I want to wish you a very happy day and a very awesome and peaceful night! When you read this, I hope that you smile because that is my goal. To make everyone smile! :shuffelin: 

Alrighty, off to the next random person! Bye 

Take care now! i got your heart 
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XD thanks for that :)
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No prob!!!
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:)
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thanks for the fav!
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np its a good story 
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thanks, feel free to comment on it if you want
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